Score: 8

"Your good but need to be a better showman"

submission: animation excercises

date: March 23, 2008

While those traditional animation exercises on this site aren't too common you can still make something even less common and make an even bigger impact on your audience.

You have some substance there already to your work but you can make your work a little more flashy to stand out above everyone else.

Thats not to say that you should make your movie purely just pretty graphics because that would be hallow and would only serve to entertain graphic whores.

It's important to make your work entertaining in and of itself since even with it's imperfections and than polish it up when it comes time to.

When your happy with your movie than that means your done and ready to show your work to everyone warts and all.

There is no tangible way for me to explain how to make something entertaining since what might entertain me might bore someone else to tears but you can still do things to make your work different from what everyone else is doing.

Coloring in your drawings will make you stand out from all the other people on this site that do traditional animation here because i notice most of the colored in animation in your short collection of animation exercises were done in flash rather than on paper.

I'm not saying piss away all your money on cels and make backgrounds but you can still ink in your drawings than color them in with markers, water color or coloring pencils.

Than you can than transfer your colored in art work to photoshop and erase any part where you didn't draw anything in and combine it with maybe a background you did to go with your drawing.

The background is just something extra to look at but it must not compete for your characters attention instead backgrounds are used to make you pay attention even more.

Your on a positive step so far. you took a year off to learn before you showed anything off.

-Mightydein

Score: 8

"this has the most plot out of all the bitey movies"

submission: Waterlollies

date: November 6, 2007

I'm a little surprised on how long this movie this is. your other movies are so much shorter.

theres a whole lot more going than i would expected so you do show some signs of vast improvement from your previous work in aspects such as plot, drawings and animation.

you have also made an improvements on making sure your movie plays how it's supposed to on as many computers as possible.

it ran smoothly on my computer for the most part and i'm getting low on ram while there was choppiness in some parts. you can't be blamed for that since it was my machines fault.

and as i recall this is your longest movie yet and also most graphic intensive. you should maybe offer a tutorial on optimization just because this movie is actually more than worth the 12 megs of movie.

I've long outgrown being a graphic whore and i've judge your latest movie all on criteria what i consider makes up a good flash.

you've become a better entertainer and this what always comes first. I find your past works focused on graphics and design more.

and even if you nearly killed yourself making this movie i somehow get the sense that you were having fun as your making it.

Thats something you rarely see in any overly ambitious projects at all since you basically force yourself to work too hard for a finished project that few people will appreciate beyond it's nice looking drawings.

none of this felt forced to me at all and i will admit that I'm jealous of your skills like so many of the artists.

keep up the good work but your movie is still somewhat lacking in storyline but at least your making improvements.

-Mightydein

Score: 7

"Not bad at all"

submission: On the Bridge 44

date: October 22, 2007

I like your drawings and your movie did have some humor to it even if it isn't my cup of tea.

keep this up and you'll be the number one pokemon master.

Score: 10

"Big is an idiot"

submission: Stop Your Shitty Posting

date: October 22, 2007

I don't know who this bigs guy is but this movie was actually pretty funny even if i never been to the clock crew or know what a bigs is.

He reminds me of those tight ass loser mods that take there job too seriously. There has to be room to have a little bit of fun in the cc fourms or otherwise it's just basically another shitty typical fourm that is way too modded to be any entertainment vaule.

I hope you get unbanned from cc and that dick bigs gets demodded.

Score: 10

"hey nes. long time no see."

submission: Select Your Character!!

date: September 11, 2007

Just looking threw some of your old movies and this is pretty impressive for something thats just a select your character screen it's actually very interesting and well made.

This has to be the best of your movies i seen so far. keep it up.

-Mightydein

Score: 9

"horny little shits can't get there porn elsewhere"

submission: Dragon Ball Z Hentai Rape

date: May 28, 2007

I actually don't mind some sexual content in ng submissions as long as it's not made to be pure wanking matteral and actually adds to the overall movie.

That teen titans movie while well made just doens't deserve that monthly prize since it goes to the lowest common denominator and just pure gratuitous sex.

working so hard on a graphic rape scene is so unnecessary but whats even worse is that it gets rewarded way too much just because of the graphics.

There are other things to consider when voting on a movie such as sound, acting, the emotion it causes you to feel as long as it's not phoney pathos and overall storyline.

Graphic wise the movie is obviously not better than the teen titans submission but i'd vote 5 for this anyday over that hentai crap since it's a whole lot more entertaining.

congrates on underdog of the week.

I just can't stand seeing too many hentai submission on newgrounds since it makes this site look so sleazy.

it's one of the reasons why this site can turn a lotta people off. Keep up the good work.

-Mightydein

Score: 10

"very useful tips"

submission: Guide to being review mod

date: January 28, 2007

with these powerful little bits of advice. I'm on way to becoming a review mod.

thanks cannabis and when i do become a review mod. My first duty will be to unban you from reviewing.

-Mightydein

Score: 10

"nice work jujubelock"

submission: LL-Accidents At Home

date: January 9, 2007

I would have never thought up such a great arugement to illwill's latest foamy rant.

If only illwillpress did his research he wouldn't look like such an idiot to people outside his very biased fanbase.

Looking forward to future works from you.

-Mightydein

Score: 0

"so playing it safe again?"

submission: : KoShEr Crackers :

date: April 6, 2006

when your little still framed rant with a topic that might have been a little controversal failed just fall back on the safe matteral.

The sad thing is this not much better than your last movie. The matteral just didn't bring a smile to my face.

PilzE is nothing more than foamy with glasses but made 10 times more annoying.

It was funny in foamy nuts to you since he was basically like a self parody of foamy but the whole pilzE thing has gotten way old after that.

In fact this series is way outta style. Your falling back on old patterns and frankly i find it insulting that you think were too stupid to take notice and be a little pissed off.

When you fail to express a controversal point and entertain your fans at the same time.

You just fall back on what is your safe matteral.

I actually perfered it when your not playing it safe even though the resulting movie still sucks like your pervious still framed rant.

Stop being a wimp and stop hiding behind your disclaimers. If i said you must have sense of humor to enjoy my flash would it make my matteral funnier?

Of cource not.

Your not taking any real risks at all.

You been sticking to this series for way too long and the quality has been going downhill even for you.

I know you see this a lot but try doing a new series or any other kind of flash that has nothing to do with the neurotically yours series.

In closing your nothing more than a sheep be a leader and take some real risks more often. It is at least more interesting than playing it safe like a wuss.

-Mightydein

Score: 3

"It's a cool start but i still want more."

submission: The Foamy Wars!-Part 1

date: January 15, 2006

It's a good start for an attack on illwill's creation but it is missing a middle and an end.

I also notice somewhat of an attempt to try to get the fanbase to go easy on your movie.

I wouldn't recommend doing that. Instead make the best movie you can make and just enjoy pissing the foam heads off.

There gonna get angry at you for killing there lord and master anyway. so why not just go the whole nine yards?

we wouldn't have it anyother way.

Stream your audio in you movie next time. I recommend you use an extra layer in flash just for audio.

It'll cut down on the load time in your movie but it will also make synching your animation a whole lot easier.

I like the first impressions of how your movie starts.

Kinda of a science fiction kinda vault unlocking before my very eyes than the movie begins.

as for the rest of the movie itself not as interesting as the first impression you given me.

Graphic wise at least.

But lets not go into graphics because i don't consider pretty graphics the only thing that adds to the movie.

I like the way you shown your character killing foamy because he was getting on way too annoying.

than the foam heads start flooding you with hate mail because you killed there lord and master.

Theres a lotta truth to that and i find that to be pretty funny.

Maybe you should make your movie a lot longer next time. The run time was hardly enough for me to really get into your movie.

The viewer needs enough time to see character delvopment going on to get a full story going.

at least minute minimum is what the viewer needs to get even a short storyline.

while storyline is not important to me for a good flash it can add a extra layer to your parody.

I wanted to see your charater kill the fan boys left and right with his shot gun in self defense but before that happens.

the movie itself is over.

you've established a begining you should have moved onto the middle instead of just ending it.

Frankly, The credits themselves are much longer than the movie itself.

Good luck on your next try and i'm glad to see a movie from a fellow foamy hater.

-Mightydein

In closing embrace the fact that this movie will anger the foamy fans and just get rid of the stupid disclaimer at the start of anti foamy movie.

I look forward to seeing what you come up with in the future.