I didn't understand the guy's last line of dialogue.
Your voice actor needs to speak with more clarity.
Voice acting can be a difficult job since cartoon characters need to have a distinct voice.
The voice acting needs to speak loud and clear.
The voice actor also needs to express character emotions verbally.
It'll be your job to give your actors clear directions to get the best possible performance.
Since you created the movie.
You'll be the best person for the job of acting as director.
A voice acting needs a distinct voice for your character, speak loud and clear and express emotions.
Your job is to direct the voice actor into fully utilizing their talent to get what you want.
You might need additional voice actors especially if your characters of different sexes.
If you can find an actor that can convincingly voice both a boy and girl than only one actor would be needed for this movie.
You likely won't find an actor or actress that can voice both sexes in most situations.
Always try to get extra actors and only make exceptions for actors talented enough to not sound like the same person.
The boy in your cartoon has a more expressive face than the girl.
I've observed girls in real life that often make very funny facial expressions.
I've never seen those sort of funny facial expressions on female cartoon characters and would really want to see girls make lively expressions.
Your girl was emotionally stiff compared to the boy.
You could draw the girl making a face like she is creeped out to enhance certain gags.
Observe girls more carefully and pay close attention to the kinda faces they make.
Freeze frame live action video of expressive girls.
Have female friends act out your cartoons to inspire you.
I hope my review and criticism help with creating better movies.
Best of luck in the future and keep making new cartoons.
- Mightydein