Pretty good effort.
Overall you have some nice looking art but often your edges were very shakey. I recommend using the straighten tool arrow in flash. It cleans edges on the paint brush tool also.
Set your audio to stream instead of event. It'll not only cut down on filesize it will also synch your audio better. Create a another layer for sound when you stream audio.
I recommend you stick to drawing your movies. I found the drawn scenes more entertaining than the sprite scenes. The voice acting is very bland and your characters should emote more strongly.
Your drawings are great but your story's need work. Overall this is good effort.