Missing something.
You got some nice animation to this flash movie but the tweening is very obvious.
If you can be a lot more subtle with your tweens and more varity to this music video of yours you made.
The song is very nice and catchy. And as for the clock killing your movie it does'nt affect me either way.
I love clocks but i would'nt give you bad scorce just cause you kill them.
Anyway, Work on having more variety to your movies cause we newgrounders have little to no attention span.
Not really all that helpful to me.
I've been making flash for one year and i'am pretty sure story line is'nt that important.
Short and sweet and good to eat.
150 frames is'nt a lot of frames and i know cause of experience with flash.
You managed to cram a lot into a short movie it was smoothly animated and was highly funny.
That was some real high quailty work into a short ammount of frames keep it up.
Also like fiber it doesn't have any calories and pads out your waste!
A new flash artist with a nice first movie.
I like the way the movie looked if you had color and better drawings it'd only be slightly better.
You should be happy with the entertainment vaule to this flash.
Life is all about having fun, relaxing and watching some good flash.
I hope you have good luck with your next movies.
Thank you, I enjoyed makin it for people like you.
An average clocky movie.The movie
The movie loaded pretty quickly for having three or so songs in it.
Your clock movies are the most entertaining outta your works.
This movie is average but i don't think it deserves all the asshat reviews it's be getting.
Work on your craft and keep at it and way to go on your underdog of the week award.
Those things are hard to get as of any with any award.
I'am surprized this past.
Dude, you capable than this and yet you submit movies like this that give you a terrible batting average.
You gotta buckle down more and make better flash movies.
Your other stuff is good though. but don't ever submit anything malicous ever again.
Not a bad first time submission.
I don't watch american idol but i did see william hung that one time.
You have potenial and you make fun of things that are relevant and current. You did a pretty good first time submission. I'd recommens that you try working on your drawings a little bit there not bad but could use improvement.
Keep up the good work and btw that william hung fellow now has a record deal for being the best of the worst.
Not bad at all, Luis.
That was pretty sweet job you did on your little time trail short.
Maybe it's better in the long run that you missed the dead line cause this makes a fine stand alone submission.
This is actually pretty cool that you made something of this quailty in just five days.
If you had made the group it would have been better but you made the front page and won two portal awards for this movie.
So you must have made a killing with something you called loser Editition.
Your style is really getting better.
I can see the vast improvement in your works if you had made this movie longer pepole would be giving you 4.00 scores.
Keep up the good work and i hope to see more kickass work like this.
Mightydein you are the greatest. Thanks for the review!
I created cartoons for newgrounds since 2003 and collaborated with artists such as livecorpse, Billy Monks and others.
I'm also known as PowerRangerYELLOW on my alt account.
I hope to make more cartoons soon.
Age 41
Internet animator
Canada
Joined on 1/8/02
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150 frames of chaos 
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