Not bad at all.
This is your frist submission?!
You have done you self really well it's better than my third submission.
Anyway I look forward to seeing more flash movie by you.
If you stream your audio next time you make a flash movie than you get smaller file sizes and please add a preloader.
The insturions on how make one are below.
In the first frame of the movie, customise your loading screen and make it look however you want it to look. Then enter the following actionScript code:
b_loaded==_root.getBytesLoaded
b_total==_root.getBytesTotal
if(b_loaded>=b_total){
gotoAndPlay(3);
}
In the second frame, insert a blank keyframe and insert a gotoAndPlay(1) action. The third frame should look identical to the first, except where it says "loading," make a "play" button.
Once you made your preloader your on your way to making better flash.