This was an attention grabbing 12 seconds of animation.
You used plenty of camera angles and somehow created the illusion of constant movement.
The animation sometimes had temporary pauses of less than a second.
The music had a 8 bit sound to it.
It sounded like it came fron a videogame soundtrack.
This video works as an introduction to a much longer movie.
I enjoyed the animation and love what you made so far.
- Mightydein
I did use the original soundtrack from Black/White 2 on the DS so that's probably why it sounds that way xD.
Thanks!
The drawing of batman looked a lot better than superman.
The shadows can use a bit of work since batman standing above superman would be a source of shade.
The one city background shown the building outlines in different shapes.
You avoided the common mistake of drawing a collection of square buildings.
The white outline to highlight batman and superman were often messy in places.
The brush strokes could use a bit more clean up.
You could also sketch the drawings to create another possible polished look.
The art was generally passable but have noted possible areas of improvement in the graphics department.
Batman could speak a bit more clearly since his dialogue sounded a bit incomprehensible.
I wouldn't understand a whole lot of the words said by batman without the submission title.
The music seemed to work effectively.
The goat soundeffect when superman gave the finger added an extra element of comedy.
I personally didn't like this movie but pointed out good aspects and areas needed for improvement.
I hope you have better luck, next time.
- Mightydein
The panning shot across several buildings until reaching the angle on main protagonist is a good establishing shot.
You moved different sets of buildings at a variety of speeds to create a semi three-dimensional effect.
It looks kinda cool and is a very effective use of motion tweens.
The guy's coat moving in the wind looked really cool.
The movie had way too many credits and actually overwhelmingly took over.
The credits felt longer than the establishing shot.
Your animation would work effectively for establishing shot in a more ambitious animated movie for this site.
Excellent establishing shot.
This short looks good so far. It just needs to be part of a more complete submission.
- Mightydein
I love the extensive usage of frame by frame animation used for this long music video.
The character drawings were extremely simple; However, a lot of special attention was paid into creating plenty of strong poses.
Sometimes, the shadows didn't interact with the characters and backgrounds as a combined entity.
Shadows often create a more polished flash if the lighting has obvious clear direction.
The rockets, fire, explosions, sunlight were often combined light sources.
It becomes increasingly difficult to give direction to shadows needed from multiple light sources.
The 2D backgrounds and characters would also have creases, folds and angles.
Basically you want to animate the shadows while your characters interact with their environments.
The pencil tool in flash is very effective for assistance with animation of shading.
You can use the onionskin tool to move those pencil strokes before additional coloring and eventually deletion of assistant pencil tool strokes.
You did a lot of work out the poses.
Why not workout the shading, lights and shadows too?
The characters seemed to move very freely in a three-dimensional fashion but the shading looked wrong to me.
This was extremely awesome frame by frame animation.
Most other animations on this site will mostly use tweens and other animation short cuts.
I'm pleased to watch movies use the most difficult way of creating animation.
Excellent work.
- Mightydein
Yo! Thanks for your thoughtful response. I will work harder to make my shading even better.
A very silly animation loop.
I love all the details put into the one closeup on the fish with a hook in it's mouth.
Did you color that fish using a digital image manipulation program?
The spots on the fish look great and the shading was nicely done.
The fish appeared to be inspired by actual fish in it's entire form.
The eye itself was a bit more cartoony and added a certain sense of silliness.
The loop itself would mostly be standard newgrounds fare for the most part.
I would label this movie as average.
-Mightydein
Thanks heaps for all the awesome feedback! Yeah I painted the fish (which is based off of a salmon) in photoshop.
I love the soundtrack used for this movie.
The music had the sound of classical orchestra but was obviously from a video game, anime, tokusatsu.
Certain forms of Japanese media create entirely orginal classical orchestra music for their anime, movies, video games, ect.
You decided on an excellent musical score for your cartoon.
The characters themselves were drawn like chubby stick figures.
The drawings were mostly amateurish; However the sound has caused me to award more points.
This movie had excellent sound.
-Mightydein
I like the attention to detail on the heart and how you drawn veins.
The background displayed a lot of creativity and actually looks really neat.
The lettering looked great too.
Unfortunately the movie's animation was simply a motion tweened heart to simulate pulsating.
The movie is very bad by technical standards and is merely a step above a blank screen.
I consider this to be an extremely bad movie; However, I do my best to point out the positives and ideas for future improvement.
This movie can improved by increased run-time and adding a lot more animation.
You seem to be very good at drawing and have the potential to create something better.
Please try again.
-Mightydein
I created cartoons for newgrounds since 2003 and collaborated with artists such as livecorpse, Billy Monks and others.
I'm also known as PowerRangerYELLOW on my alt account.
I hope to make more cartoons soon.
Age 41
Internet animator
Canada
Joined on 1/8/02
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