Your movie still needs a bit of finetuning.
The subtitles went too fast for me. The movie felt very lifeless without sound. the movie suddeleny picked up pace once the music started playing.
I like how you made the animation look a bit like the video game.
Get yourself some voice actors for this flash series your gonna make. Most pepole on this site have very short attention spans and don't want to read everything the characters say.
You just need better backgrounds and sound to bring more life to your flash.