Mightydein's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Simple and Clean Collab]

You all lack ambition for your collab
Almost every

I never liked flash when a buncha artists gathered together to animate there motionless character singing in a white background in the first place.

The Lip synching is the worst i've ever seen in this kinda of movie.

A lot of this movie's drawings are very incosistant and some of the drawings themselves did'nt even stick with the kingdom hearts theme.

Don't be afraid to reject ruched scenes from your movie because it will make it a better movie in the long run.

An original concept with consistently awesome scenes will make for a much more successful collaboration

In closing good luck with your next attempt at a solo or collab movie.

-Mightydein

[The Doom Project]

Well made but i still did'nt like it.

I'm pleased to see you did'nt use your ussual group of peers as partners in your movie.

Everyone did a great job animating there scenes and i think there was a lotta frame by frame animation in there too.

My personal favorites outta the whole collection is sickdeathfiend and gerkinman's parts.

It was really intruging to watch the whole movie including the extras and it would be interesting to see more collabs of this quality.

In closing very well animated and put to together but a original concept would have brought my review over the top.

-Mightydein

[One Piece music video]

You lost your motivation?

I honestly never could get into one piece. I was never a fan of the manga or even the anime for that matter but for some strange reason i love this flash.

I love your synching with the music and the way your frame by frame animation defied physics.

I'm actually relived you did'nt try to make it look exactly like the anime it self.

You got the characters structures down pat without compromising your own style and i would have to say this movie is without a doubt defiantly pure you.

For an unfinished work it is very well presented but unfortunately unfinished works ussually always ends before the audience gets a chance to get into it.

I can understand how you can lose motivation and just give up on working on your movie but it is better to actually go back and finish what you started.

In closing if you ever do go back and finish your movie than please don't rush.

-Mightydein

[Power Ranger Parody]

I loved power rangers back in the day.

I love your literal twist on the title "Power rangers in space". the way it was all set up was very well executed.

The power ranger actually being shot into space while the power rangers in space theme song is playing.

makes for some laugh out loud matteral in my book. My only mayjor complaint about this movie is i wish it was a lot longer.

perhaps even spoof even episode of the power rangers.

In closing as a power rangers fan myself i was thoroughly entertained.

Dogster080 responds:

AWESOME!!! I may take that idea in consiteration ^___^ Im glad you liked it!!

[DBZ - Go Go Gogeta]

A step in the right direction for turds.

I gotten tired of all the hentai turd of the week movies because they gotten insainly cliché.

Those were funny at first but it become so common the joke lost all novelty for me.
I find it refreshing to see a turd of the week earned fairly and not because of an overused lame attention grabbing gimmick.

You could have used drawn your animation or use sprites but you used 3D screen shots and traced the bitmaps.
These were animations you arranged from screen shots and the resulting animation still comes out jumpy.

I love the choice in you music and sound effects for this flash. The music itself is perfect for this flash and i love the sound effects you made with your mouth.

Those sounds effects made me chuckle a little bit.

you should look into tutorials on audio optimization because the song chosen for the flash should never be longer than the movie itself.

In closing have better luck with your future submissions.

-Mightydein

[Under a Killing Moon]

Looks good so far.

This movie should have been longer. Great job on the optimazing on your flash movie.

I don't see that much in a 400kb submission. you have the potential to make a better movie.

Even if it means a bigger file size just use your potential to it's fullest to make a longer and better movie. I don't mind waiting for the movie to load.

It's long enough for an event to happen but this type of movie is'nt an event piece.
This more of a start to a storyline and that in it self is many events.
Do your research before writing a script just so that your not historically inaccurate. No matter how well ploted out your movie is.
Someone is bound to complain about the movie being historically inaccurate.

you manage to create a small sense of danger within this movie. But still it was'nt long enough to create real suspense. It's more of a rushed attempt at a cliff hanger.

Just because i'm reviewing a little harsh don't mean i don't like your submission in fact i love it. I love the way you drew your night time atmosphere.

It actually looked like it was night time and i was really albe to lose myself myself in this movie and take myself outta reality for a little while.

In closing good so far but this movie is too damn short.

-Mightydein

Colingsmith-art responds:

Thanks for a well thought review. This submission is a prelude to a bigger story, I should have made that more clear.

Glad you like my stuff, i think you'll like the next part a lot more.

-c

[Papalote++]

An improvment from Hoy te amo ++

I like the frame by frame animation and your drawing style. But i hate some of the color choices.

Honestly the color scheme looks a tad dull. maybe perhaps do some more of the neat little things you did with light and shadow though out the movie.

Normally i'd recommend the artist to use gradients to color the sky but it's not important in any of your movies since your made good use of the solid colors.
What this movie lacks in graphics makes up for it in stlye.

The result is professial yet amatureish at the same time.

I like the way you draw your enviroments and the things you did with perspective in this movie.

You made great use of all you cammera angles and none of em were tossed in for the sake of being eye candy.

it's actually more an quick event than a storyline but it works great on universal level.

In closing i hope my review helps you to become a stronger menace and an inspiration to new artists.

-Mightydein

O-Ovinnie responds:

thanks a lot for the feedback..

"
You made great use of all you cammera angles and none of em were tossed in for the sake of being eye candy.
"

someone said the same thing on Hoy te amo++, it was you¿

[CANfrontation]

This is a kick ass first attempt at a new style.

I like the first impression this movie gives like the 3D city for example but your anime drawing is very oddly expressed and could use more fine tuning.

The first few seconds look better than the whole damn movie.

I found the guy with the purple hair's head too small for his body. Learn about human human proportions and keep practing with your drawing.
Join a site any online art community. they can give you all kinds of advice on getting better at drawing anime.

Try thinking in three dimensions with all your animations. this will slove a lotta problems you have perspective.

Also teach your self though observing real life in action. I'm not saying you should try to learn to draw realisic.

You can delvop your own style by observing so many things. Anime is'nt just restricted to one drawing style.

There are so many styles you can try to teach yourself.

Just keep practing fine tunning your drawing style and please put more thought into a story.

Other than all this You might wanna learn about flash optimaztion also.

Sorry if i'm being harsh but i want you to be as successful as you can be.

-Mightydein

[Making Flash History]

channel your inspiration to make something better.

This movie seems to me an animated slide show of what you think your favorite movies are.

There are so many better ideas you could have picked instead of a top 20 list.

It's cool your showing support to the other artists on this site but i seriously don't think this is the best method to express your love for the artist's work.

You could leave contrutive reviews, vote on there work and even take inspiration from there very animations them selves.

Create your own quality flash movies to match or rival them in quality.

You could have taken there work as an example of what kinda flash we want to see.

I don't think i'm the only one who wants to see you make something different and orignal instead of this glorified favorites list.

Anyway if your gonna make another one of these top 20 lists at least make the layout a lot more professional.

Better luck on your next try.

[My GOD, Robots! pilot]

This is pretty entertaining

Your graphics were'nt the best but you made up for it in style and overall entertainment vaule. it has a pretty interesting storyline and it ended just when i was getting into it.

it has a decent humor put to it. I laughed a little bit during some of the scenes of this movie.

The cartoony style works so well with this movie. I loved your useage of frame by frame. Very smoothly animated and the little intro and outro made it feel like i was watching something on tv.

Overall this is good for a begining of a series but could stand a little more improvement.

-Mightydein