Mightydein's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[DBZ - Go Go Gogeta]

A step in the right direction for turds.

I gotten tired of all the hentai turd of the week movies because they gotten insainly cliché.

Those were funny at first but it become so common the joke lost all novelty for me.
I find it refreshing to see a turd of the week earned fairly and not because of an overused lame attention grabbing gimmick.

You could have used drawn your animation or use sprites but you used 3D screen shots and traced the bitmaps.
These were animations you arranged from screen shots and the resulting animation still comes out jumpy.

I love the choice in you music and sound effects for this flash. The music itself is perfect for this flash and i love the sound effects you made with your mouth.

Those sounds effects made me chuckle a little bit.

you should look into tutorials on audio optimization because the song chosen for the flash should never be longer than the movie itself.

In closing have better luck with your future submissions.

-Mightydein

[Under a Killing Moon]

Looks good so far.

This movie should have been longer. Great job on the optimazing on your flash movie.

I don't see that much in a 400kb submission. you have the potential to make a better movie.

Even if it means a bigger file size just use your potential to it's fullest to make a longer and better movie. I don't mind waiting for the movie to load.

It's long enough for an event to happen but this type of movie is'nt an event piece.
This more of a start to a storyline and that in it self is many events.
Do your research before writing a script just so that your not historically inaccurate. No matter how well ploted out your movie is.
Someone is bound to complain about the movie being historically inaccurate.

you manage to create a small sense of danger within this movie. But still it was'nt long enough to create real suspense. It's more of a rushed attempt at a cliff hanger.

Just because i'm reviewing a little harsh don't mean i don't like your submission in fact i love it. I love the way you drew your night time atmosphere.

It actually looked like it was night time and i was really albe to lose myself myself in this movie and take myself outta reality for a little while.

In closing good so far but this movie is too damn short.

-Mightydein

Colingsmith-art responds:

Thanks for a well thought review. This submission is a prelude to a bigger story, I should have made that more clear.

Glad you like my stuff, i think you'll like the next part a lot more.

-c

[Papalote++]

An improvment from Hoy te amo ++

I like the frame by frame animation and your drawing style. But i hate some of the color choices.

Honestly the color scheme looks a tad dull. maybe perhaps do some more of the neat little things you did with light and shadow though out the movie.

Normally i'd recommend the artist to use gradients to color the sky but it's not important in any of your movies since your made good use of the solid colors.
What this movie lacks in graphics makes up for it in stlye.

The result is professial yet amatureish at the same time.

I like the way you draw your enviroments and the things you did with perspective in this movie.

You made great use of all you cammera angles and none of em were tossed in for the sake of being eye candy.

it's actually more an quick event than a storyline but it works great on universal level.

In closing i hope my review helps you to become a stronger menace and an inspiration to new artists.

-Mightydein

O-Ovinnie responds:

thanks a lot for the feedback..

"
You made great use of all you cammera angles and none of em were tossed in for the sake of being eye candy.
"

someone said the same thing on Hoy te amo++, it was you¿

[CANfrontation]

This is a kick ass first attempt at a new style.

I like the first impression this movie gives like the 3D city for example but your anime drawing is very oddly expressed and could use more fine tuning.

The first few seconds look better than the whole damn movie.

I found the guy with the purple hair's head too small for his body. Learn about human human proportions and keep practing with your drawing.
Join a site any online art community. they can give you all kinds of advice on getting better at drawing anime.

Try thinking in three dimensions with all your animations. this will slove a lotta problems you have perspective.

Also teach your self though observing real life in action. I'm not saying you should try to learn to draw realisic.

You can delvop your own style by observing so many things. Anime is'nt just restricted to one drawing style.

There are so many styles you can try to teach yourself.

Just keep practing fine tunning your drawing style and please put more thought into a story.

Other than all this You might wanna learn about flash optimaztion also.

Sorry if i'm being harsh but i want you to be as successful as you can be.

-Mightydein

[Making Flash History]

channel your inspiration to make something better.

This movie seems to me an animated slide show of what you think your favorite movies are.

There are so many better ideas you could have picked instead of a top 20 list.

It's cool your showing support to the other artists on this site but i seriously don't think this is the best method to express your love for the artist's work.

You could leave contrutive reviews, vote on there work and even take inspiration from there very animations them selves.

Create your own quality flash movies to match or rival them in quality.

You could have taken there work as an example of what kinda flash we want to see.

I don't think i'm the only one who wants to see you make something different and orignal instead of this glorified favorites list.

Anyway if your gonna make another one of these top 20 lists at least make the layout a lot more professional.

Better luck on your next try.

[My GOD, Robots! pilot]

This is pretty entertaining

Your graphics were'nt the best but you made up for it in style and overall entertainment vaule. it has a pretty interesting storyline and it ended just when i was getting into it.

it has a decent humor put to it. I laughed a little bit during some of the scenes of this movie.

The cartoony style works so well with this movie. I loved your useage of frame by frame. Very smoothly animated and the little intro and outro made it feel like i was watching something on tv.

Overall this is good for a begining of a series but could stand a little more improvement.

-Mightydein

[Beavis versus butthead]

love your movie and really tried being contructive

Not bad at all. I loved the way you spoofed you past movies and the viewers response to the movies themselves.

I love the improvements from your past beavis and butthead movies. I found the result to be a lot more entertaining and it has a lot more thought put it.

You even also managed to spoof anime in the movie too. Your movie entertained me but i think your graphics could use a lotta fine tuning.

This time they actually look like beavis and butthead. the voice acting has improved but i think you could use some practice drawing your character's human proportions. I found the limbs to look awkward in some scenes like there arms were too small for there body and such.

It also would'nt hurt to make the hair move a little more.

The other characters did'nt look a thing like the beavis and butthead and the incessantly in the style somewhat annoying. another suggestion would be to get yourself a scanner and take up painiting.

Using water color paintings as the background will make it look a lot more true to the show it self. It will make it look more like the show than just a flash movie.

The characters respond the same way beavis and butthead would when put in the same situation but i personally think you should train yourself yourself better to get the mike judge drawing style down pat.

A very nice tribute to beavis and butthead. this is one of the more entertaining movies i seen all day.

I loved your improvments and i gave you the most advice i can give you to improve your tribute farther. I was very impressed and i tried my best to think contructive criticism to truely make this best tribute it can be.

Very worthy to carry the beavis and butthead name. Keep training yourself in the mike judge drawing style.

This is Mightydein signing out.

RogerregoRRoger responds:

Okay, thanks for your critics, altough i already said this is the final..

About water paintings, in the years i have tried a million diffrent style backgrounds, and while i am checking movies who usually get high scores on newgrounds, they usually have.. barely a background at all, so in the same way in the whole fight scene, most cuts have just blue as backgrounds..
Somethimes i tried to do a sort of painting effect, with the backgrounds having no dark lines around them, but yeah..About my scanner, it sucks.
The characters Beavis adn butthead look a lot more clean then Mike Judge, but that's my own impact to them, i tought people here prefer clean drawings a lot more..Altough I'm very sketchy myself as it is already.

THe other characters look a whole lot diffrent then beavis and butthead, with the obvious answer, because B&B were created in a lab, so they are the ones who actually look strange, not the others..this movie plays in the same universe as most of my other movies, like IMP, thuss all "normal" people look like that.

The hair.. yeah, hair is tough, except for the headbang scene and Butthead getting a object shoot at him at fast speed, their hairs never move, for obvious reasons, because it's extremely hard to draw them faces right, so i kept re-using the same face graphic over and over again.. how cheap of me..

Last, the body shapes, bad poses, bad proportions..i can't even defend myself in that one, I'm very bad in that.. ah well..
THanks for the advice, I'll keep it in mind if i do a diffrent tribute to something, or chance my mind and make another B&B movie

[Orgasmic Symphony]

Nice little movie

This movie sums up everyone's teen years perfectaly oneway or another. This is movie short and sweet and made me giggle.

Given this movie's subject matter it's actually kinda tasteful and classy.

Good work luis.

[Alinoë Revised]

Good but not great.

I can see that you have gotten better with drawing and the movie creates a really dark and depressing atmosphere.

The art was incosistant for example it looked great in spots while flawed in others. The flaws took me out of the atmosphere you set up.

i liked the useage of photoshop for the backgrounds and the many camera angles.

You could use practice drawing guns and other things but overall the graphics were great.

And here is some advice for future movies of yours. Look into books on human anatomy and look at a pictures of objects you want to draw as reference.

Go in more depth into your storylines like making some scenes longer and include diologe between the characters.

Overall a big improvment from your past work.