Mightydein's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Alinoë Revised]

Good but not great.

I can see that you have gotten better with drawing and the movie creates a really dark and depressing atmosphere.

The art was incosistant for example it looked great in spots while flawed in others. The flaws took me out of the atmosphere you set up.

i liked the useage of photoshop for the backgrounds and the many camera angles.

You could use practice drawing guns and other things but overall the graphics were great.

And here is some advice for future movies of yours. Look into books on human anatomy and look at a pictures of objects you want to draw as reference.

Go in more depth into your storylines like making some scenes longer and include diologe between the characters.

Overall a big improvment from your past work.

[Escapism]

This movie is'nt that bad.

I actually enjoyed watching this movie. this movie really created an atmosphere for me and i was able to lose myself.

with an improvement in your graphics and plot you'll be able to grab the viewers attention and come to a satisfying conclusion.

The ending to your movie showed me that you were tirred of working on the movie and wanted to end it right away.

The movie felt like there could have been more to it.

I was dissappointed by how short your movie is but you manage to grab my attention .

The frame by frame in the movie is pretty good for a first time submission.

I liked the message within the movie. it was clear without being too preachy. You can still use a lot more practice but ignore the asshat reviews they'll only destroy you and take away your drive to improve.

Better luck with your future movies next time.

BaconisGood4You responds:

Thanks for the (very thorough) review Mightydein!

"The ending to your movie showed me that you were tirred of working on the movie and wanted to end it right away."
Exactly :). I had been working on this off and on for almost five months ( :O) and I was not to happy with certain scenes but wanted to get it finished.

[Morten vs Piranha plant]

Pretty cool frame by frame animation.

You have a lotta potential to be making some pretty cool submissions. Your movie somehow manage to create an environment. I love your use of many camera angles.

Not many submissions on this site do much with perpective. Even though i have'nt seen your other works. I think you should be sticking to making frame by frame animations over sprite animations.

You clearly have the talent for it. Try Drawing some backgrounds and adding color and shading.

You'll create a new level of quality to your work. Keep practing and you'll be kicking ass.

[Ask Mr. Owl]

I remember those tootsie pop ads when i was a kid.

This movie was the ad to a tea and i love the fact that on the lolly pop the word law suit is right on the tootsie pop.

I almost thought i was watching the ad until the kid killed mr turtle.

Overall an average submission.

[Comp.Graph. Final Project]

Pretty cool

This movie was a nice bit of action animation. I loved the intease speed. one thing that seemed to bother me was the music stoped 7 seconds before the movie ended.

It was very akward and killed the fast pace you set in the begining. I recommend you take up painting or photoshop and practice with it.

Sure these background tricks for flash movies make the swf bigger but it would seem fitting on this sorta movie. your graphic are very cool and i loved how smoothly animated it was.

Not a bad attempt but make a much longer movie next time.

[Story Tag 2b: Blown Away]

Not bad at all.

This is one of the more orignal movies i see on this site. Your graphics were'nt great but your storyline kept my interest and i liked the little intro that explains what happened in the last episode.

I was able to jump right into the movie and get into it.

[MegamanXMaverickAttack2 A]

Pretty good effort.

Overall you have some nice looking art but often your edges were very shakey. I recommend using the straighten tool arrow in flash. It cleans edges on the paint brush tool also.

Set your audio to stream instead of event. It'll not only cut down on filesize it will also synch your audio better. Create a another layer for sound when you stream audio.

I recommend you stick to drawing your movies. I found the drawn scenes more entertaining than the sprite scenes. The voice acting is very bland and your characters should emote more strongly.
Your drawings are great but your story's need work. Overall this is good effort.

[The Mad Scientist]

Newgrounds needs more orignal movies like this.

You did a kick ass job on the synching the audio and the track you picked is perfect for this movie. The drumbs and other elements of the song acted as the sound effects, music and voice acting(Screaming).

the art it self is not too impressive but the way you animated your drawings is.
Nice use of frame by frame animation and cool use of photoshop.

I loved the way parts of the movie go in and outta focus at the right times.

You have the skills of an animator but work on your story telling. I found the plot to be a little weak.

anyway, this is a very good movie and orignal stuff like this is getting harder and harder to come by.

I'll be looking forward to more movies from you.

[Cool Things 398]

That was awesome.

This movie has been one of the best cool things i seen a while. You really gotten batter flash wise with your work.

I can't really say you been lazy with this movie altough you are a relaxed and layed back.

I loved you spoof on the piconjo confessions and the way you just basically gone nuts with this movie.

I never seen free style flash movies in a while.

-Mightydein

Sir-CannabisClock responds:

thanks, glad ya liked it ^^

I did put a little more into this, but I'm still a lazy bastard :D