Mightydein's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Beavis versus butthead]

love your movie and really tried being contructive

Not bad at all. I loved the way you spoofed you past movies and the viewers response to the movies themselves.

I love the improvements from your past beavis and butthead movies. I found the result to be a lot more entertaining and it has a lot more thought put it.

You even also managed to spoof anime in the movie too. Your movie entertained me but i think your graphics could use a lotta fine tuning.

This time they actually look like beavis and butthead. the voice acting has improved but i think you could use some practice drawing your character's human proportions. I found the limbs to look awkward in some scenes like there arms were too small for there body and such.

It also would'nt hurt to make the hair move a little more.

The other characters did'nt look a thing like the beavis and butthead and the incessantly in the style somewhat annoying. another suggestion would be to get yourself a scanner and take up painiting.

Using water color paintings as the background will make it look a lot more true to the show it self. It will make it look more like the show than just a flash movie.

The characters respond the same way beavis and butthead would when put in the same situation but i personally think you should train yourself yourself better to get the mike judge drawing style down pat.

A very nice tribute to beavis and butthead. this is one of the more entertaining movies i seen all day.

I loved your improvments and i gave you the most advice i can give you to improve your tribute farther. I was very impressed and i tried my best to think contructive criticism to truely make this best tribute it can be.

Very worthy to carry the beavis and butthead name. Keep training yourself in the mike judge drawing style.

This is Mightydein signing out.

RogerregoRRoger responds:

Okay, thanks for your critics, altough i already said this is the final..

About water paintings, in the years i have tried a million diffrent style backgrounds, and while i am checking movies who usually get high scores on newgrounds, they usually have.. barely a background at all, so in the same way in the whole fight scene, most cuts have just blue as backgrounds..
Somethimes i tried to do a sort of painting effect, with the backgrounds having no dark lines around them, but yeah..About my scanner, it sucks.
The characters Beavis adn butthead look a lot more clean then Mike Judge, but that's my own impact to them, i tought people here prefer clean drawings a lot more..Altough I'm very sketchy myself as it is already.

THe other characters look a whole lot diffrent then beavis and butthead, with the obvious answer, because B&B were created in a lab, so they are the ones who actually look strange, not the others..this movie plays in the same universe as most of my other movies, like IMP, thuss all "normal" people look like that.

The hair.. yeah, hair is tough, except for the headbang scene and Butthead getting a object shoot at him at fast speed, their hairs never move, for obvious reasons, because it's extremely hard to draw them faces right, so i kept re-using the same face graphic over and over again.. how cheap of me..

Last, the body shapes, bad poses, bad proportions..i can't even defend myself in that one, I'm very bad in that.. ah well..
THanks for the advice, I'll keep it in mind if i do a diffrent tribute to something, or chance my mind and make another B&B movie

[Orgasmic Symphony]

Nice little movie

This movie sums up everyone's teen years perfectaly oneway or another. This is movie short and sweet and made me giggle.

Given this movie's subject matter it's actually kinda tasteful and classy.

Good work luis.

[One Love V2]

why the resubmit?

You really should have just updated the orignal movie though your grounds gold and even if the movie is above 5000 views.

You can wait a few days for an admin to see your update. You either did'nt know that or are trying to repeat the same success you did the first time.

The many artists working on this at once some lazy, other working there asses off in the end the entire package is all charaters standing there lip synching.

I hated the first time and i hate it now.

[Alinoë Revised]

Good but not great.

I can see that you have gotten better with drawing and the movie creates a really dark and depressing atmosphere.

The art was incosistant for example it looked great in spots while flawed in others. The flaws took me out of the atmosphere you set up.

i liked the useage of photoshop for the backgrounds and the many camera angles.

You could use practice drawing guns and other things but overall the graphics were great.

And here is some advice for future movies of yours. Look into books on human anatomy and look at a pictures of objects you want to draw as reference.

Go in more depth into your storylines like making some scenes longer and include diologe between the characters.

Overall a big improvment from your past work.

[Escapism]

This movie is'nt that bad.

I actually enjoyed watching this movie. this movie really created an atmosphere for me and i was able to lose myself.

with an improvement in your graphics and plot you'll be able to grab the viewers attention and come to a satisfying conclusion.

The ending to your movie showed me that you were tirred of working on the movie and wanted to end it right away.

The movie felt like there could have been more to it.

I was dissappointed by how short your movie is but you manage to grab my attention .

The frame by frame in the movie is pretty good for a first time submission.

I liked the message within the movie. it was clear without being too preachy. You can still use a lot more practice but ignore the asshat reviews they'll only destroy you and take away your drive to improve.

Better luck with your future movies next time.

BaconisGood4You responds:

Thanks for the (very thorough) review Mightydein!

"The ending to your movie showed me that you were tirred of working on the movie and wanted to end it right away."
Exactly :). I had been working on this off and on for almost five months ( :O) and I was not to happy with certain scenes but wanted to get it finished.

[Morten vs Piranha plant]

Pretty cool frame by frame animation.

You have a lotta potential to be making some pretty cool submissions. Your movie somehow manage to create an environment. I love your use of many camera angles.

Not many submissions on this site do much with perpective. Even though i have'nt seen your other works. I think you should be sticking to making frame by frame animations over sprite animations.

You clearly have the talent for it. Try Drawing some backgrounds and adding color and shading.

You'll create a new level of quality to your work. Keep practing and you'll be kicking ass.

[Ask Mr. Owl]

I remember those tootsie pop ads when i was a kid.

This movie was the ad to a tea and i love the fact that on the lolly pop the word law suit is right on the tootsie pop.

I almost thought i was watching the ad until the kid killed mr turtle.

Overall an average submission.

[Comp.Graph. Final Project]

Pretty cool

This movie was a nice bit of action animation. I loved the intease speed. one thing that seemed to bother me was the music stoped 7 seconds before the movie ended.

It was very akward and killed the fast pace you set in the begining. I recommend you take up painting or photoshop and practice with it.

Sure these background tricks for flash movies make the swf bigger but it would seem fitting on this sorta movie. your graphic are very cool and i loved how smoothly animated it was.

Not a bad attempt but make a much longer movie next time.

[Story Tag 2b: Blown Away]

Not bad at all.

This is one of the more orignal movies i see on this site. Your graphics were'nt great but your storyline kept my interest and i liked the little intro that explains what happened in the last episode.

I was able to jump right into the movie and get into it.

[DailyToon01052005]

One of the better daily toons

Good work on your animation to this movie. too bad you were'nt motivated enough to actually finish the movie.

This is a nice little music video and it ended just when i was getting into it.
I love the point you raised that you don't wanna work too hard on a good movie because you'll get accused of mass voting no matter how good.

TheStarSyndicate responds:

I <3 j00