Mightydein's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Robot Factory]

Good work on your short about robots.

The animation is very smooth for a submission and i'am surprized it did'nt go so well.

It's interesting to think that someday pepole will become so depending on machines that machines will replace us.

The graphics look really good and not too animeish so i'll give you big points for making it look like your own thing.

I'am looking forward to seeing more from you.

cook responds:

I did it at 24 fps.

[drowning anime]

The graphics look good and smooth animation.

But you should'nt submit movies that are unfinished.

The movie could have used some sound and be much longer and include some kind of small story to go with.

Maybe a little bit more than drowing.

Anyway, It looks good but the entertainment vaule in this movie still needs fine tuning.

Next time submit something with longer than 5 seconds.

[What a Day]

The flash was pretty good.

Although the live action scenes kinda annoyed me but you did make up for it with your animation.

I don't see too many animtions on newgrounds created outside flash but you did a great job compressing it to fit into newgrounds.

The animation was smooth and a some great hand drawing.

Next time you make a movie like this. make it in flash form so the loading time is'nt so long and you get more bang for your buck.

I would'nt mind seeing more from you.

[IM RPG intro]

Good work my wormy friend.

The animation to you flash overall is very good for an all frame by frame flash movie.

The movie is actually very entertaining for being a very short flash movie and i hope you have better luck in your future submissions.

MrBigStick responds:

thanks man, i'm running out of things to say, so i'll just respond, then when im done, i'll take a nap.

[The next Motoko 1]

Don't resubmit a movie with a slight change.

You could have used your grounds gold to change the swf of where you orignaly submited your movie.

I wanted you continue from where you last flash left and if your to put a storyline into your next movie make it much longer than this.

The flash movie is too short to contain any real story but no good flash never needed any damn story to it.

Anyway, please respond to all your reviews. It makes it look like you ignore feedback and don't want to improve.

[EgoCity Chap II]

You compress your movies all too well.

It seems this movie should have been at least 3 to 4 megs of flash movie but you managed to cram 6 minutes of smooth animation and really good drawings into less than 2 megs of movie.

Your a very talented artist and one of these days one of your many hardworks in flash will reach the front page.

Please keep up the good work.

[Hyper Fighting Robots]

I demand a second epsiode of Hyper fighting robots

This is fine parody of the giant robot style anime but you might want to cut down on the strob lights to any future episodes you make this cause you lose more viewers if you include too many flashing lights.

The overall story to the flash is'nt all that great but the humor more than makes up for it.

If you happen to make a second episode let me know.

Yarharhar responds:

I did make a sequel of Andy's Awesome Cartoons, and it is on newgrounds. And thanks!

[Cloud vs. Sephiroth EX]

This movie still needs a lotta fine tuning.

While the submission itself is alright but your art suffers from lack of detail in the coloring.

I'd suggest you learn how to create gradients for backgrounds such as the sky and use the pencil tool and sharpen tool to clean the edges.

Work on using better choices in the music. The music you choicen is not suited to a fight scene.

Try again.

snapper0505 responds:

well i agree with everything you said but the music. its suited fine for a fight scene...has no one watched undercover brother?

[Banana Phone]

Good work Dave.

That delightful song has been stuck in my head since yesterday cause of this very flash movie and i love it.

Great job on the animation and humor i already put this flash into my favorite lists because i know this movie will go though repeat viewings for a long time or when ever i'am in the mood for banana phone.

Keep up the good work and i'am looking to more those movies.

[Passion Of The Christians]

Good work eric.

Funny flash movies about jesus chirst should'nt be anything new or even shocking to the average newgrounds user but it seems to be ture.

When compaired to your sunday school movies this is a tame movie and good for a quick laugh.

The movie is just a goofy and dumb movie and i recommend you take it for what it is or don't watch it if you have strong christain faith.