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Mightydein

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Interesting concept of simulating old animation; However, it doesn't look a thing like classic animation from anywhere that I seen.

Perhaps you can study the techniques of old cartoons by reading old art books such as a preston blair book for example.

You could also study old live action movies, old cartoons, ect.

I really like the simulated film look.

The picture had scratches, sometimes flickered and the picture would sometimes have other film like mistakes.

I'd be interested in seeing how your new movies look.

Keep making new stuff.

thaKclucle responds:

Thanks for the advice, as far as future projects go I'll certainly be doing more research on very old films, glad you enjoyed some of the concepts.

Your backgrounds have always been my favorite visual element of the yonder ho series; However, a lot of it's moving parts were a bit distracting.

It sometimes took attention away from your characters.

Your backgrounds can both look cool and assist with bringing increased attention to your characters.

Think of the background as creating an invisible frame.

Work on training your audience to pay most attention to the important parts.

Your characters will need to behave in ways to attract attention to themselves.

This might mean hair and clothes moving in the wind but slightly faster than the background plant life.

I don't often see plant life moving in the wind included in a whole lot of animation.

moving backgrounds was a cool addition and I hope my criticism will help create improved new episodes.

This series is really good and pleased to notice that you never settled on the same battling average.

Your always trying to make the show better and it has shown in your work.

I hope your future movies start winning awards and front page placement.

Keep up the good work and I hope my small bit of criticism helps.

-Mightydein

Bertn1991 responds:

Thank you so much for watching! I completely respect your criticisms and appreciate the honest feedback. You are truly the best kind of fan :)

The look of this episode was very experimental. Maybe you're right, though. Maybe there is too much movement. With the new episode I'm working on I've been messing around with blur effects to try to take focus off of the backgrounds so maybe that'll make things a bit better.

Front page you say? You're very kind, but I don't think I'm there quite yet hehe. Maybe if I keep listening to you, huh ;)

You show a lot of potential in your work so far.

The previous submission watched while bad shows a very high level of potential to be very successful.

I really like the cute character designs.

Your characters are really cute.

If you can get your buttons to work than you can easily create a very interesting game.

Do you have flash?

A game could be created from primitive action script.

You have a very cool idea and I would like to see you become a lot more successful.

You are off to a better start than most other artists on this site.

-Mightydein

scottie2006 responds:

First of all, this was my FIRST project,and got deleted,SECOND,I learned more about using this.

This could be a game sometime.

Just gotta fix the problems,and time to work on the story!

-SCOTTIE2006,Flash-imator

I created cartoons for newgrounds since 2003 and collaborated with artists such as livecorpse, Billy Monks and others.
I'm also known as PowerRangerYELLOW on my alt account.
I hope to make more cartoons soon.

Age 41

Internet animator

Canada

Joined on 1/8/02

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