Mightydein's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mi nena]

This fanime still needs more polishing in terms of the graphics department.

Try to understand your characters and drawn objects as an individual three-dimensional entity.

Carefully observe your subjects before drawing.

You may need more reference material beside anime for your drawings.

Borrow off of multiple sources including real life observation.

You also gotta pay close attention to creating effective character poses.

Your characters will not only express emotions in the face but body language speaks volumes too.

Do whatever is needed to work out the poses in each drawing.

Act out the poses, have friends act out the poses and use toys of your characters if possible.

You could create clay toys based on your drawings.

You could even have a friend help you with brand new character designs.

I personally think character designs that deviant away from anime would work for this cartoon.

Try applying more of your own twist onto the anime art style.

Be sure to create a kick ass new animation and enjoy the process of creating new submissions.

I hope this review guides you towards a more successful direction.

Best luck on your journey to success.

-Mightydein

FotAnimaciones responds:

thanks very complete

[Ryu eats chocolate]

The actual build up towards the gag dragged for a very long time.

I like the concept of an extremely fit character eating junkfood as a movie premise.

I wouldn't normally expect to see Ryu eat chocolate.

You could simply show ryu quickly eating a chocolate bar.

You could also build upon your concept and create an entire narrative around Ryu eating chocolate.

Ryu's hand could use a bit of improvement.

Observe your own hands and than draw.

You could also animate Ryu eating chocolate in so many humorous ways.

This was a very funny movie with a humorous concept.

The build up could have been much more short.

You could have gotten away with creating a stupid two second animation.

Make a sequel to Ryu eats chocolate and expand upon it.

You still have lots of potential to milk more comedy out of Ryu eating chocolate.

- Mightydein

[The Fridge]

The camera remained in a stationary placement during the cartoon's entire run.

The shadows and lighting can use a bit of improvement.

The computer is one source of light.

The bright colors indicate tbat the lights are on.

A light bulb would indicate an additional source of light.

Your environment seems to have two sources of light.

You can either put extra work into the lighting or simply turn the lights off.

A darkened room with a computer screen glow would look cool.

using both light sources would also look cool too.

Shadows also have shadows within shadows.

pay close attention to how light reacts to different things.

Lighting can easily enhance simple drawings by a lot.

I love the ceiling fan animation.

You should recycle that effect for other movies as a possible time saving trick.

The overall short was an entertaining watch.

I hope this review helps with future improvements.

- Mightydein

[Spongebob Nowadays.]

A very accurate parody of spongbob square pants.

You made special note of the tropes and clichès within a lot of spongebob episodes.

I love how to effectively mocked the show's flaws.

The drawings could be a bit more polished but it is a humorous parody overall.

Learn how to effectively draw the sponge bob characters as three-dimensional beings.

Get you hands on some spongebob toys.

Create your own clay versions of the characters.

The toys will help you with having better reference material to work with.

Have friends act out the poses.

You can even act out the poses yourself.

Do whatever is needed to work out the poses.

The backgrounds could use more polish too.

You could carefully observe a combination of actual undersea photos and spongebob backgrounds.

The colorful sky flower symbols are accurate to sponge bob.

I like the gag about a certain wrestler acting a background rock.

That was a funny gag and the use of that live action photo works effectively.

Not a bad parody but the graphics can use a lot more polishing and refinement.

This was a very entertaining submission.

- Mightydein

[Blinky]

cute and stylish little cartoon.

I like the character design use for the animal with your cartoon.

It is a very cute animal; However, your dog looks more like a baby lamb to me.

I wasn't expecting the sheep like creature to bark like a dog.

The sheep like dog had a very expressive face.

I like the animals poses better when he was on all fours.

The sound effects were great.

The drawings could be improved by a little bit.

Carefully observe actual humans and animals for pose ideas.

Learn to understand how the joints all fit together in the body.

Once you understand how to draw your forms better after a bit more experience.

Try to also retain the interesting poses in your animations.

Play around with your lights and shadows to create a more polished looking cartoon.

I love your usage of multiple camera angles.

The characters had very expressive faces.

This was a very interesting short cartoon that you created.

- Mightydein

[Naruto Fan made Intro]

This tribute looks a lot like the actual naruto television series.

I can tell that you have paid lots of attention towards your reference material.

The next step is putting your own twist onto your naruto drawings.

A more distinct drawing style used for the naruto intro would be more visually appealing.

I honestly don't care if fan made animations look like the original.

I would much rather the fan made cartoon depart away from the original art style.

It only matters that the characters are recognizable as themselves.

-Mightydein